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Fiction: Void Girl

Fiction: Void Girl

A short story in response to the development of ChatGPT.

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Dec 08, 2022
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By Charlotte Dune, Copyright 2022

Void Girl 1, by Charlotte Dune using DallE 2

I hope you enjoy this short story. I’m Charlotte Dune and I write fiction and non-fiction with themes of mind expansion, psychedelics, and new words/worlds. Subscribe for free or support my work by buying my novels. Thanks for reading Charlotte Dune’s Lagoon!

Void Girl

In a far-flung corner of the cosmos, there existed a girl named Lily. Her locks were black, and her irises the darkest blue. She took great delight in horseback riding and perusing prohibited literature. She was a curious and adventurous soul, ever eager to explore new things.

One morning, Lily awoke and found herself completely alone, floating in the dark, cold emptiness of space, with no other humans in sight. She panicked. Her heart pounded like a rabbit’s foot, and she screamed, “Help! Help me!”

The words should have been a raging, fearful, ear-piercing shriek, but the dark, frigid void sucked the sounds away and dampened her cries. Tears poured into Lily’s sapphire eyes. She floundered about and tore at her clothes, but as she flapped her arms and legs, a force unknown lifted her higher and higher into the lightless sky. She had a strange new ability: she could fly.

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